Group Feedback Summary
Following the presentation of my music video treatment, I
handed out feedback questionnaires to be filled in and returned. I used a panel
of six people to fill in the questionnaires and hand them back.
Following is the overall data I collected from the returned
questionnaires.
I began by asking the audience if they thought the idea
would be interesting for the target audience. Five out of six of my panel
thought the idea worked because it had a good clear narrative that appealed to the
target audience, one out of six of my panel simply said “yes”.
My next question enquired if they thought the idea was fully
realised and if they got a clear enough picture.
All of my panel gave positive feedback, stating that the
idea was clear and easy to read on my blog, with some commenting that the
lyrics were emphasised within the proposal and the song.
Following this, I quite bluntly asked the panel, if they
thought the idea worked. Three out of six of my panellists said it worked
because the lyrics related to the meaning of the song and the video. Two said
it conveyed a deep sense of emotional loss, and one didn’t answer.
Finally i asked the panel what they thought the best part of
the idea was.
Four of the six said that the best part of the idea was the
inclusion of the lead singer’s grandfather, who is the main focus of the video.
Two replied that the best part of the idea was how the video was personal to
the band’s lead singer.
Most of my panel didn’t see a problem with the idea, but one
person replied saying that the video didn’t explain what the artist was trying
to convey, and didn’t talk about previous videos.
Conclusion
From my feedback, which was positive for the most part, I
have concluded that the idea appealed to my target audience and made for a
gripping visual narrative, as well as conveying the mood of the video
successfully.
I think this is mainly due to the inclusion of the lead
singer’s grandfather, and the links between this, the lyrics and the visuals.
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